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Reconciliation retold with text boxes

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So, due to my recent obsession with Goatdad, I re-read my fanfiction "Reconciliation", and decided that I wanted to do something. I thought drawing, but since I'm crap, I thought against it. Then I remembered seeing a post on the Undertale Reddit using text boxes to tell a story, so I decided to go with that idea. I retold the story with text boxes (although there were no options for blank boxes on the site I used, so all Frisk's moments can only be seen if you read the fanfiction. I also tweaked a few of the facial expressions in MS Paint to get what I wanted, so that was pretty fun. A few things had to be changed dialogue-wise because of formatting issues and trying to make things sound a little better.

Enjoy!

Also, it's so long, wtf!

And yes, I know that Asgore has two of the same text boxes. That was a mistake on my part. Please disregard the second box; hopefully, it won't distract anyone too much.

Site used: ianmccowan.nfshost.com/underta…


EDIT: I think I'll redo this at some point. After being in the fandom for a few years, I think I can do a bit better with this.
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JakeTheArmyGuy's avatar

Literally all I want from Deltarune i for Asgore to have a spine and stand up for himself. What we've seen so far is sad. I loved this little story. Even if it is outdated in your eyes, it still holds a valid message that I wish could have happened in game. I love both Asgore and Toriel, but I feel she doesn't get called out on her hypocrisy.